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Family In Bondage
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jun 3, 2005)
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Wife marries husband for money and then turns him and his family into her personal slaves. |
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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Plot was there but the chapters don't need to end with the same question. I have seen it in other works by the author and to me that detracts from the plot. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jun 4, 2005 |
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Still some good ideas, but the lack of quotes and generally bad grammar takes a good tale and turns it into trash. (3/10)
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