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New Challenge
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jun 15, 2005)
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A wife returns home to find her husband being dominated by a young black mistress. She tries to take control only to find herself submitting. |
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Average (?):  (2.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 24, 2006 |
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woefully bad, (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jun 17, 2005 |
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I took a look at this to see if Palladin had worked on his writing skills. Nope. Too bad. There's nothing original here in the plot, and the writing is as bad as always. (1/10)
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