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The Stock
Author: Shadeofnight
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(Added on Jun 21, 2005)
(This month 52000 readers) (Total 66073 readers) |
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Silent had plotted and planned for weeks for this day, and now that it was here, he had to use all of his control to play it cool. He had managed to install an old-fashioned wooden stock in the spare room of his house, and he could not wait to lure a few of his friends into trying it out. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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very well thought through, very well done (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
BDSgirl
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Jul 3, 2005 |
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mmmmm i like Silent a lot.:) and i like the descriptions. the only thing i would say against is the sometimes confusing change of tense. that is merely editing though. i am going to enjoy the further adventures.
blu (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Jun 28, 2005 |
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Wonderful tale from both points of view. Erotic, exotic, sensual...delightful. Print and vibe material all the way.
note to author: an editing refresh to catch a few errors and to not drop us so quickly into the ending would pop this up to a 10 (9/10)
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- Replied by:
shadeofnight
(Edit) (Jun 28, 2005)
- My Thanks :)
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| Reviewer:
masterbw
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Jun 28, 2005 |
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Totally enjoyed this story. I liked the telling of the story from both sides and I also liked the slow methodical work of Silent. More discovery between these two is in order. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
shadeofnight
(Edit) (Jun 28, 2005)
- *smiles*
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jun 22, 2005 |
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A very well written story with a plethora of detail and abundant sensuality. I am curious as to your choice in naming your male protagonist. Unless I missed something his peculiar name adds nothing to the story except some initial confusion. The story however was excellent and more than made up for this little quirk. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
shadeofnight
(Edit) (Jun 22, 2005)
- I feel in love with the name Silent a long time ago, and used it as my last name for a long time in the SCA/Markland. I have also used it as an alias off and on over the years. Not many people these days know me by the name, so it was a way to write a little of myself into the story in my own way :). My thanks for the nice review and I am very glad you enjoyed it.
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