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A Wicked Beginning Author: Pallidan
(Added on Jul 3, 2005) (This month 53905 readers) (Total 68480 readers)
A girlfrient offers to turn my mother into a slave like hers. The offer is too good to turn down.

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Weighed Average (?): (4.5/10)
Average Rating: (4/10)
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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Mar 5, 2006
i have to agree with rebelfan1. your stories are all getting way to repetitive, the same basic everything and they are also to short
as youpost in the future, please try a differnt NC type story, use the NC theme but come up the a different plotline, the idea are endless if you think about it, and there are already way to many NC with Hgih School girls (5/10)

Reviewer: crickette (Edit) Rating: Aug 7, 2005
While Inever wanted to do anything like this to my mother there were a few teachers and some very uptight, snooty people I would die to do this too. In that respect, my fantasy was quite good and thank you for asking. The story was short but did not feel rushed. More details on the training of the mother would have added a little more spice. (6/10)

Reviewer: rebelfan1 (Edit) Rating: Aug 4, 2005
Pallidan continues to post the same plot over and over again. His/her writing and gramatical skills are below a grammer school level. Please learn how to write or find someone to edit your stories. Otherwise, stop posting them because there actually get in the way of searching for good stories. (1/10)

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