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The Beginning of a Black Neighborhood
Author: Pallidan
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(Added on Jul 13, 2005)
(This month 55888 readers) (Total 70484 readers) |
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Two African foreign exchange students arrive at a white teacher and daughter home and start to take control of the household. Next comes the neighbor daughter and mother. It is just the beginning of their conquests. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
arlene(bigsissy)
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Feb 28, 2012 |
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i enjoyed reading it good story any more chapters (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
KatMann
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Oct 12, 2006 |
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Pallidan's stories kick ass. If you want Literature, go to the library. This story was a great turn-on. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
rilawild
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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It's good to see that speech is now in quotation marks, it makes it easier to read than earlier stories. Now a but more care in the proof reading and editing and it would be a great story.
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mr. Pete
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Jul 15, 2005 |
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Jeez... same problem as always. Get an editor! (Example? In the first sentence, you mention the "exchanged" students. It's so blatant that I wonder if you're not just playing a joke on the whole website with all your stories. Well, you got me!) (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 14, 2005 |
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where are you going from here?? (7/10)
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