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Ruth Becomes A Slave
Author: Brabazon
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(Added on Jul 27, 2005)
(This month 147689 readers) (Total 204608 readers) |
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Sexy young lawyer is degraded and humiliated and turned into a sex slave. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
impressme
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Aug 5, 2005 |
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Somewhat disappointed in the story. Found myself skipping/scanning for something interesting. Using drugs to accomplish a D/s relationship feels like cheating. Also didn't like the removal of all personality traits of the slave. Felt like two steps above necrophilia. Won't bereading anymore of this author's works (4/10)
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rce
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Jul 29, 2005 |
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(This review is ignored in calculating the rating of this story!) Not the kind of master/slave relationship I like. You forgot to mention in the story codes that there would be a F raping the f. I do not fancy stories of lesbian sex and was unpleasantly surprised by this. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Brabazon
(Edit) (Aug 10, 2005)
- Many thanks to all those who have taken the time to write reviews, and especially for the constructive suggestions about how the style and narrative could be improved. Good points. This was very much a first effort, and I hope that your comments will be reflected in my next attempt. I am afraid that there is not much that I can do about the comments of 'rce' and 'impressme' regarding content, although I have asked the webmaster to add F/f to the story code to address rce's specific issue. The content of the story is there because it amuses me; if the content also amuses a reader then that is great; if not, then there are many other stories on the site which will meet specific preferences.
- Replied by:
Jinn
(Edit) (Aug 18, 2005)
- The F/f code was added to the story. This review is ignored because it is based solely on a missing story code. If you would like to get your review counted again, please edit your review. Thanks!
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Jul 28, 2005 |
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Very powerful and gripping in the beginning, but unfortunately overexaggerating in the second half. Besides credibility of the plot - a sexually humiliated female lawyer is a far more special and exciting thing than the plain slut she is made to become. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
RhondaLee
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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If it is only 1 part, then it is too short for such good story development. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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Not bad, not bad, but a little bit too plain (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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love these type stories (10/10)
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