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Jean's Past
Author: dgtrekie
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(Added on Aug 13, 2005)
(This month 8940 readers) (Total 23587 readers) |
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Jean confronts her past. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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Very interesting ideas. However, it feels ... unfinished. Still, good overall. (7/10)
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bdsmbill
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Aug 15, 2005 |
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This was a very touching story. The use of the nickname "sweetie" seemed appropriate and didn't bother me at all. It will not be popular with those looking for heavy sex, but it was a nice story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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A wonderful, sensible and expressive story. Although no sexual content, it is very worth while reading. It would also deserve a final proofreading to eliminate some stumbling blocks. (9/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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First of all, who is AL? You only mention them once. Secondly, this story has good potential, but it just doesn't flow well. Perhaps you need someone to help you edit them or ask over in the forum here for help. Third, and last, stop using the word "sweet" so repetitively. We get it ... the sub/slave girl is nice. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Winnie
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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A good editor would have helped to make this more enjoyable. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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it was a good story, just not as exciting as i thought it might be (7/10)
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