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Early Morning Delight
Author: Ms. Madison
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(Added on Aug 20, 2005)
(This month 49006 readers) (Total 55206 readers) |
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She is being beligerent to her Master, but that attitude won't get her very far. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
AsianAngel
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Sep 4, 2005 |
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This isn't exactly my type of thing, but it was enjoyable for what it is. The change in perspective (from "he" to "you") near the end threw me. I realize it's a literary device, but it doesn't work for me most of the time, and unfortunately it didn't here either. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
fireflysex
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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Splendid - simple yet effective tale that hopefully will develop further. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Aug 21, 2005 |
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Truly a sensual delight, but I have to disagree with your synopsis. That attitude got her very far indeed. Your story will no doubt lead to more than a few sweet subs being warmed across their master’s knee but I know of at least one who will come without permission. What to do with such a naughty girl? (10/10)
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