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The Reception Centre
Author: DavidB
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(Added on Sep 2, 2005)
(This month 71818 readers) (Total 106294 readers) |
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Girls processed for training as slaves for male and female purchasers |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
j_michell
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Mar 4, 2007 |
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Please finsh. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Nov 26, 2005 |
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I like the story how it is, would be nice to find a new chapter. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Sep 13, 2005 |
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An interesting premise, but the many spelling and grammatical errors kept yanking me out of my enjoyment of it. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
sheilagirl
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Sep 7, 2005 |
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I liked it. I especially liked the way the writer takes each girl one by one so I can enjoy each one's situation. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Sep 6, 2005 |
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I'm not quite sure what to make of it. As another reviewer mentioned, it seems rather mechanical, with all of the emotional context removed. With further installments, I'd be willing to reconsider my score. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Deputy Duffy
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Sep 4, 2005 |
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I just read the first two chapters. I liked the story line, having a medical fetish but it could have been so much better.
It just left me cold because the characters are so cold. No feelings, just going through a laundry list.
Hopefully, things can pick up.
I’m giving this story a six but I’m being nice.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 3, 2005 |
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good start but you need more detail (8/10)
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