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The Salvage Ship Scorpion
Author: R.B. Thibo
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(Added on Jun 19, 2001)
(This month 257863 readers) (Total 308158 readers) |
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A Story about three brothers in the salvage businesses and have a bit of fun along the way. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Jan 7, 2007 |
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Hi, just found this story.
Thanks very much for this nice and intensive story. I love the ideas with fishing lines and hooks.
Would be so happy i You write another story next time. I am not a person who is looking for mistakes in gramar. I look only for the ideas and if i like the story, because english is also not my mother language.
Regards Kira (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
shifty007
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Jun 20, 2001 |
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very good story just a little short. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Jun 20, 2001 |
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This story could have scored much higher if the author had a better command of the english language including verb tense and spelling. The violence is heavy duty, but not yet extreme. There is potential for the story to develop into something fairly good, but it is doomed unless the author receives some assistance with his english, which is obviously not his native tongue. (5/10)
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