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The Birthday Present
Author: solivagus
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(Added on Oct 8, 2005)
(This month 54728 readers) (Total 73585 readers) |
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Thomas gets more than he bargained for when his wife agrees to dominate him on his 40th birthday. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Anneya
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Apr 18, 2006 |
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I loved this story, and would like to see it continued.
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| Reviewer:
Ranai
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Nov 20, 2005 |
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In form this tale is nicely delivered, so I'll confine myself to some notes on the content.
Conversation at the beginning of the story: good, interesting.
Only two weeks of research and she knows exactly what she wants and how she wants it? Hardly convincing.
Transformation into leather clad fetish model: trite, stereotypical, unimaginative. Who needs a bunch of paraphernalia on first embarkment into joys of domination? (Here the story slid into the 'fulfil his fantasies' trap.)
"You will address me as...": nothing interesting here.
Thwack: dutifully delivered without much gusto.
Metal chair: delicious.
Subsequent developments: very nice and sexy!
Insights into T's thoughts and emotions: definitely enjoyable.
A first orgasm is merely an overture: ah, well spotted. :-) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Oct 10, 2005 |
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A beautiful Pandora box story. Very well done. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Oct 9, 2005 |
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That is a terrific Pandora's box story. Well done. Inventive, which is difficult to do in this often tired genre. (10/10)
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