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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
doctavian
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Mar 21, 2011 |
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"First Time" What I enjoy most about this story, is that it reminds us that sexually erotic themes are not not gender limited. Every potential fantasy that males have, women have as well. (If not with the same frequency) Thank you Ashtree, for a well written story and for helping us better understand ourselves. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 17, 2009 |
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not much into spanking but the story isself was good (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Oct 16, 2005 |
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I had to give this story a higher rating, mostly because it deserved it. Yes, it was short, and I can honestly say too short because all it did was get me interested. La Toya is right, this story needs at least two or three chapters. You've got a great set up...just keep going with it. The extended version could be the retelling of each rape! The language wasn't choppy, it was British. Even I could tell that. You were a little vague on descriptions. Angela, her house, the pub, everything was pretty much left to our imagination. Set you scene. However, despite this you did a great job of making the dialog take up the slack. Anyway, those are my recommendations. There were a few minor grammarical errors, but nothing major. Good Luck with the next installment! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Elkor
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Oct 15, 2005 |
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Fair writing style, could have some more embellishment on the acts to set a better pace. Came across as rather choppy.
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Oct 15, 2005 |
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So far I have read two of the writers stories.They were good, but would have been better if put together as chapters. Both were short, and could have used a lttile more detail (6/10)
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