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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 24, 2006 |
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a synopsis would have eben real nice or at least codes (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Nov 26, 2005 |
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Well, seems to be a rather juvenile offering in style and content. Not exactly up to the standards the Library strives for. I hope the remaining chapters can improve the score (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Nov 25, 2005 |
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So, her ass was both red and white?? Pick a color! The story plot seemed to be an obvious one...both brother and sister use her. Perhaps it will pick up if you write other chapters. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
DungeonMaster6
(Edit) (Nov 25, 2005)
- There are supposed to be four more chapters of this story. If the current regime decides to post them maybe you'll find it more appealing
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Nov 24, 2005 |
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This reminded me of a story that a junior high school kid would write. It was clear and straight forward but lacked life. Further, the story was entirely predictable and rather contrived. It also lacked erotic qualities that this sort of story should possess. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
geoff
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Nov 23, 2005 |
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Aussie sub - I'm not sure where you get your rating from - it was ok for plot but the writing did not reflect that. Not a 9 - 7's being generous (guess I'm generous) (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
aussie sub
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Nov 22, 2005 |
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A good read and i look forward to further chapters. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DungeonMaster6
(Edit) (Nov 24, 2005)
- There are seven chapters in this story. They were all submitted before the new owner took over. Hopefully the others will be posted as well. Thanx for the compliment.
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