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Norah\'s Descent
Author: Alfamann
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(Added on Dec 12, 2005)
(This month 99401 readers) (Total 137825 readers) |
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Wealthy 42 year old female landlady is forced to submit to, and accept, a life of BDSM at the hands of her teenage tenants |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 7, 2009 |
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Outstanding story. Excellent nurturing of Norah's personality, as she slowly succombs. The narrative has the right pace, and though the scenes of collecting the rent and the punishments are repeated every forthnight, there's no sense of repetitiveness, thanks majorly to the author's skill in portraying Norah's inner musings while things are happening to her.
It's a real shame no additional chapters were added in almost three years now. I guess I'm not the only one around here who's hoping Alfaman will awaken from his slumber and continue "Norah's Descent", right up to its deserved finish.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
feb20d
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Dec 12, 2006 |
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Very enjoyable. Really like your stories! Keep us informed of updates. (9/10)
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chksng19
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Sep 27, 2006 |
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An excellent story, begging for a continuance. (9/10)
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mlbryant
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Feb 10, 2006 |
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Enjoyable! There's great pacing that seems to pick you up without any control. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
rilawild
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Dec 29, 2005 |
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I very much enjoyed this story. The characters are very good and the descriptions excellent. I look forward to more chapters and to see what happens to Norah next. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Dec 20, 2005 |
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great story! I hope you will keep it going (9/10)
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mastersall
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Dec 17, 2005 |
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Well written and hopefully there are more installments ... as alwys the struggle with submission is an interesting topic.. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Dec 16, 2005 |
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This is a terrific story! Frankly, I don't
understand mkemse's review. What was wrong with
the "context" that he should be "disapointed"
(sic) in it? And what was so awful about "to"
(sic) much spacing between the chapters? (BTW,
there were also a handful of typos and a
continuity error -- but who cares?) If the
continuation is as good these first chapters,
I may well be revising my rating UPWARD.
The central character, Norah, is very well
drawn and clearly deserving of much attitude
adjustment and behavior modification. The
power reversal is gradual, believable, and
inexorable. The writing is clean and crisp.
Altogether 1st rate! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 15, 2005 |
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the story was a good read but i was disapointed with the context and there was to much spacing between parts (7/10)
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