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My Day of Punishment
Author: dgtrekie
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(Added on Feb 1, 2006)
(This month 8936 readers) (Total 18710 readers) |
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A subs punishment after disobying her Master and his friend |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Feb 3, 2006 |
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A very ho-hum story with a theme that has been used and re-used. Perhaps you could add a bit of originality? (4/10)
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- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (Feb 10, 2006)
- For some reason this author choose to respond to my comments via email rather than here. Since she doesn't allow email to be made to her I will respond to her here: It doesn't matter to me that your story is over two years old and it doesn't matter to me that you think your theme is new and original. What does matter to to me is my opinion, which are like assholes--everyone has one! If you didn't want people's opinions, then you should not have submitted your story to a site that allows their members to review the stories. You cannot make someone like your story just because you like it.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Feb 2, 2006 |
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It was not bad. It was a nice story to read. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Feb 2, 2006 |
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ok, in the better average I would say (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 1, 2006 |
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not bad, it was a good read (7/10)
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