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Fate Of Faith
Author: Sonya Esperanto
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(Added on Feb 15, 2006)
(This month 8538 readers) (Total 17363 readers) |
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About a horny mother who was in need of drugs and had submitted herself as a slave to a friend of her son’s, in exchange for those drugs. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 15, 2007 |
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my kind of story
And thank you for posting a story that is NOT about superheores (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
rebelfan1
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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Ok, enough of the fantasy stories. They are poorly written and just taking up space. THEY ARE ALL THE SAME!!! (1/10)
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- Replied by:
sonyaesperanto_15
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2006)
- This story had nothing to do with superheroines or comic characters. Bet u didn't even read it.
I haven't since you written anything at all, so put your $ where your mouth is, jackass
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| Reviewer:
chooky_104
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Feb 19, 2006 |
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This story went too fast. The Author put all ideas into motion within the first paragraphs. Too predictible and rather boring. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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Feb 16, 2006 |
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The ending feels like the author got bored with the story and just felt like ending it. Otherwise it was enjoyable. Shows promise (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Feb 16, 2006 |
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Not Bad. I kind of wish there was more (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Feb 16, 2006 |
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i am assuming that english is not your first language. in which case - applause to you for writing and submitting!! - i just found it hard to read because of the disjointed language used. i thought the story line was good. would really like to read a rewritten, edited version. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 16, 2006 |
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Fine progress on the English usage here, still some work needed; parts of speech misused, incorrect words, a few other concerns. However much better than yesterday.
The story could use more development, and some guidance on how to write to an ending. Keep working at it! (6/10)
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