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Slavery in the Saudi Kinkgdom
Author: Bella
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(Added on Feb 28, 2006)
(This month 83068 readers) (Total 129317 readers) |
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A wealthy Arab kidnaps a young Israeli girl and uses her as his personal sex slave |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2012 |
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Not a story that makes me go wild, but a good one nevertheless.
As stated by other reviewers, this is an above average first story.
from all the previous reviews, Nikita's comes closest to my own thoughts about "Slavery In The Saudi Kinkgdom".
Just wondering if that "K" in "Kinkgdom" was deliberate.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
StrangeGirl
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Jun 1, 2006 |
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i like the idea of jewish slave :) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
laursie
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Mar 6, 2006 |
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Not bad at all for a first story. A simple abduction slave tale but I like those. Cant wait to read more. Keep up the good work (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Mar 2, 2006 |
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I have to admit that I burst out laughing and snorted when I read your warning!
As far as your writing goes, it is not bad--there were no glaring errors or tons of typos. However, your story is a bit tired. Maybe you can liven it up a bit when you continue on it. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
castle2001
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Mar 2, 2006 |
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Very ordinary. Needs greater character development and kinkiness.
Details of abduction & transportation lacking. Activity in car premature and just plain dull. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Bella82
(Edit) (Mar 2, 2006)
- You know, I kind of agree with you on the actions of the story being fairly dull.
But as for details of the abduction and character development- I write what I like to read and I am one to skip over organizational plot details and character development in frustration. I would have no interest in reading about details of an abduction, hence I did not write it in.
And as for kink? What counts as kink? Some people make it work, but generally my preference is for stories that do not involve formal elements of bondage, D/s, toys, latex etc.
I like simple raw sex with a male Dom and female subs. That is what I get off on.
I plan to make this a multi part story that will start to get into some kinkynes in the third and fourth parts on. I am ambivalent about the character development issue though. It might start in part five for the sub.
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Mar 1, 2006 |
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Nice first story. Is this a one chapter story? (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Bella82
(Edit) (Mar 2, 2006)
- Thanks. No, I think it will become about 7 parts
- Replied by:
Bella82
(Edit) (Mar 2, 2006)
- Thanks. No, I think it will become about 7 parts
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Feb 28, 2006 |
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I read this story objectively. But I had to consider the races because it is an important element. It is a basic sex slave story, complete with abduction, nc sex and humiliation, that was well expressed, by the way. Pretty good for a first story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Bella82
(Edit) (Mar 2, 2006)
- Thanks!
I read some of your stories too and I am flattered to be reviewed highly be a writer with good ability.
- Replied by:
Bella82
(Edit) (Mar 2, 2006)
- Thanks!
I read some of your stories too and I am flattered to be reviewed highly be a writer with good ability.
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