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Carlos\' Bitch
Author: Incomplete
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(Added on Mar 14, 2006)
(This month 28840 readers) (Total 62082 readers) |
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Good girl Tina was abducted and blackmailed by two thugs |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
lonewolf8
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May 4, 2006 |
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I'm loving this! But the updates are coming way too slowly!
Why hold back on such a great story?
We need more... much more! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Apr 20, 2006 |
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I agree with the formatting issue. It would have been easier to follow, but I worked through it and it was a good story...familiar type of thread with a few tweaks here and there. Please continue writing. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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Have to agree the format was poor.
Now that the formatting has been fixed the story is an excellent read. Hope to read more and I am glad the author took the advice of readers. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Incomplete
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2006)
- I use Opera as my browser and it looks fine on mine. Also, I emailed it to webmaster via pdf, and that's fine as well. Not blaming him, but maybe he can post it in pdf??? I hate getting blasted for formating when it's neatly spaced on the versions I work on.
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| Reviewer:
Mad_Splitter
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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Now he formating has been fixed is very good hope you will continue with the story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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Reformatted with second chapter. Not a bad story, a little familiar from so many retellings. Not much new about it. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 14, 2006 |
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the layout of the story makes it justtoo hard to read, you must reformat it to make reading easier (2/10)
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