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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Lowest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Sep 2, 2006 |
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good story but you realy needed a synopsis to draw readers in (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sklaventreiber
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Mar 26, 2006 |
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I enjoyed the story, there are some areas that need work. Are you a native english speaker? If so then you need to use your grammer check more often if not seek help to fine tune the grammer. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Mar 23, 2006 |
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Very well developed story. A little far fetched but excellent work of erotic literature. (8/10)
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