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Cupcake
Author: The Outsider
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(Added on Mar 24, 2006)
(This month 62210 readers) (Total 88074 readers) |
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I\'m back, and soon there will be new parts to that story. Thank you Madame SE. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
| Average
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Mar 27, 2006 |
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Couldn't get through to the end of this one.. after about the 50th grammatical error I had to stop reading. I suspect that perhaps English isn't this author's first language. (2/10)
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mr_slogan
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Mar 27, 2006 |
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You need to focus on one thing andnot have your story bounce from topic to topic. I found it difficult to decipher what was happening. It shows good imagination. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Mar 24, 2006 |
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The story had some promise however the bouncing around from action to action made it a bit difficult to read. (5/10)
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