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The New Slave
Author: Aussiegirl
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(Added on May 14, 2006)
(This month 71172 readers) (Total 85128 readers) |
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Jill waited nervously on her knees to meet her new master. What would he be like? What would he expect of her? |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
slave ruthie
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Sep 7, 2006 |
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i love the interactions and the way you bring out the character of the slaves, particularly the inner contradictions about submission :) and i see you struggle with something i find very difficult too - how to give the Dominant any dimension besides being Masterful and In Control. you tackled it very well though and i enjoyed this story very much :) please keep writing! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
isabeau
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May 16, 2006 |
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well i'm glad i read the reviews before posting, because i was just going to ask about beth..anyway love this story, very well written and i like Master William.. he seems like a compassionate Master..and i found it great that he treated her as he did after he found her.. can't wait for more (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 17, 2006)
- Thanks so much,
I am glad you liked it, just wait until you can read the full, completed story. It should be on line very soon. I appreciate the great score, expecially in light of the mixed up text.
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| Reviewer:
catbird36
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May 15, 2006 |
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Great read I really liked it and am looking forward to reading more of your stories. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 16, 2006)
- Thanks, I hope you will read the completed version when it gets posted very soon. I appreciate your vote, especially as I mixed this one up.
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| Reviewer:
chattel69
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May 15, 2006 |
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Don't understand the connection from chapter 2 to chapter 3. The ending was completely different then what was expected. An enjoyable read all the same (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 15, 2006)
- thanks, I sent in two chapters from an old story by mistake. The proper story will be up on the site very soon. Please give it another go.
glad you liked what was there anyway.
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| Reviewer:
bluejedi
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May 15, 2006 |
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I enjoyed the story greatly. However it seemed that you had parts of your last story in this one. chapter 3 and 4 seemed like they were from your last story betrayed. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 15, 2006)
- thanks,
I was wondering what was going on with the reviews!!! I have just sent in the completed story, so please give it another go.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 15, 2006 |
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your work is getting much beeter as you conitune to write and post keep up the good work (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 15, 2006)
- Thanks,
I haven't heard from you for a while. Glad you liked the story.
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| Reviewer:
miya79
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May 15, 2006 |
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I love this story but it seems there are two stories unrelated somehow melted together. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (May 15, 2006)
- Glad you liked the story and thanks for taking the time to vote and review.
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