advanced search

List Stories

Newest Stories
Highest Rated
Most Voted
The Longest
Recent Pop
Overall Pop
List by Title
List by Author

More ...

Underground Tournament Author: Deathnote
(Added on May 19, 2006) (This month 68599 readers) (Total 95668 readers)
A bored master slaver wishes for more entertainment. Therefore, he sends out one of his henchmen to search for strong fighters. Sixteen fighters will enter a tournament, but only one will have their wish granted. The rest will become slaves...

Ratings and Reviews:
Number of Ratings: 9
6 Votes
6 Votes
6 Votes
6 Votes
6 Votes
6 Votes
6 Votes
6 Votes 2 Votes
6 Votes 2 Votes
6 Votes 2 Votes 1 Vote
6 Votes 2 Votes 1 Vote
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
0% 67% 0% 22% 0% 0% 11% 0% 0% 0%
Weighed Average (?): (3.5/10)
Average Rating: (3/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (2/10)

Review this story: Rate It! and add review for this story
Only user can review stories


Seems you are not login.
Go to the forums to login!

then refresh/reload this page

Want to register? It's free!
Forgotten your password?


Reviewer: mirage (Edit) Rating: Sep 20, 2007
the writer has indicated that he has written a introduction or idea thus there's no real story in this work
I thought the synopsis looked promising enough - maybe worth a story. (4/10)

Reviewer: isabeau6 (Edit) Rating: Jun 6, 2007
i disagree, i felt the author putting himself/herself into the story was very entertaining..i see it's never been finished..too bad..i was getting into it..
isabeau6 (7/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: May 28, 2006
Just a fragment, without any backstory or development of character. Lots of effort needed to pull this thing to the "readable" category.
This isn't a video game, to flop your audience down in the middle of... this is a communications device. If your audience can't get involved in the story, or identify with a character, you'll lose them.
(update)Reading some of the added chapters has me convinced not to waste my time further... or to change the rating. (2/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: May 22, 2006
This must be the first story ever, that is pornographic in nature and is written for children...
Reading this effort brought to mind those early "Batman & Robin" episodes with Adam West: completely wacko and over the top, with little to no interest for grown-ups...
4 is my score, cuz this kind of story simply isn't my cup of whatever beverage of your choosing...
I would like to see you tackling a more "serious" type of story, though, cuz your writing in itsself isn't that bad...
JJ (4/10)

Reviewer: La Toya (Edit) Rating: May 21, 2006
far far to short to review (2/10)

Reviewer: Spitman (Edit) Rating: May 21, 2006
18 story codes and only 4k. That is really taking a liberty. You have to do work to qualify as a genuine writer in here. (2/10)

Reviewer: bondage_man69 (Edit) Rating: May 21, 2006
a rather boring attempt. (2/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: May 20, 2006
simply does not work (2/10)

Reviewer: Tsurmon (Edit) Rating: May 20, 2006
For one thing, don't leave your own comments in the story. Very unproffessional. Second, kind of an immature premise. I don't really mind if you can pull it together, since immature and poorly written fiction is actually a fetish of mine. Third, try not to be so random. A ninja dropping off a ceiling and chugging wine? Doing stuff like that interrupts the mood of a story and hampers immersion.
Keep trying, and good luck. (2/10)

BDSM for All
Free sex stories

(This Month)