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Claire
Author: jessminty
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(Added on Jun 2, 2006)
(This month 49144 readers) (Total 59930 readers) |
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Claire\'s first meeting with her Master |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
renko
(Edit) |
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Jun 6, 2006 |
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Nice style.. well paced, and very believable. Please continue the story (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jessminty
(Edit) (Jun 11, 2006)
- Thank you, I hope to when I get time.
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| Reviewer:
mickcmc
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Jun 6, 2006 |
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An extremely enjoyable and erotically captivating story. An author whose future work I look forward to reading again. Shows great promise - has she been published before?
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
jessminty
(Edit) (Jun 11, 2006)
- You are very kind, I am glad you enjoyed it! I will make sure you are aware of any future writing I attempt.
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| Reviewer:
sweetness and light
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Jun 5, 2006 |
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Makes the reader wish it were them, and their first submission. Very well written (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jessminty
(Edit) (Jun 11, 2006)
- Thank you very much.
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| Reviewer:
Aussiegirl1
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Jun 5, 2006 |
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Nicely done. I really enjoyed the way you developed the story and allowed us into her head. Looking forward to reading more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jessminty
(Edit) (Jun 11, 2006)
- Thank you- that means a lot- I wondered while writing it if I was spending too much time inside her head.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jun 4, 2006 |
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A wonderfully told and accurately portrayed "first submission" tale. The deep feelings expressed are beautifully correct. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jessminty
(Edit) (Jun 11, 2006)
- What a lovely thing to say, you caught something in this story that I hoped was there.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 3, 2006 |
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very enjoyable (7/10)
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- Replied by:
jessminty
(Edit) (Jun 11, 2006)
- I am glad you enjoyed it.
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