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Captured, Caged, Milked and Enraged
Author: The Qmoq
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(Added on Jun 9, 2006)
(This month 87288 readers) (Total 142152 readers) |
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A young woman is kidnapped, but rather than submit to her captor, she fights back at him at every opportunity, suffering ever more horrible punishments. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
secretly
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Apr 14, 2010 |
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Missing story codes! MF/f+ (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Qmoq
(Edit) (May 20, 2010)
- Thanks! I love it when people rate my stories poorly just because of a minor administration error. I see you do that to other folks too. Well done, secretly, well done.
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Jan 14, 2008 |
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Excellent story, I have no dings. I look forward to more from you in the future. :) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Qmoq
(Edit) (Jan 15, 2008)
- Thanks, bmt! I have a few more stories to post - I hope you enjoy those as much as you enjoyed this one. Q
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mkemse
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Jan 3, 2008 |
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the story was o, the spacing was terrible to much extra space, you need to tighten up the sentences and paragraphs to make it easier to read
ok as long as you are awat=re of it, you do not control the final posting (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Qmoq
(Edit) (Jun 10, 2006)
- Hi mkemse, I've written to the site to tighten up the spacing - I only intended to have one line between paragraphs, but it's come out wrong.
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| Reviewer:
kililiv
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Jan 3, 2007 |
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Now if only such nutrients were easily available! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Avralivia
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Jul 13, 2006 |
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i thought it was a fantastic story Q,really good - but it needed editing to get rid of the error caused by when u brushed against the = key. This made it hard for me to read, but i persevered as it was a great story.
*hugs* (8/10)
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subgirl
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Jun 13, 2006 |
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wow...liked that you let the girl submit..and defy for most of the story...they tend to become boring when the girl is broken to quickly like in a lot of the ones I've read. Creative ...all realistic, not too over the top... (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Qmoq
(Edit) (Jun 13, 2006)
- Thanks, subgirl! It was tricky making it wholly unenjoyable for poor Missy - it was very tempting to throw her an orgasm.
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chksng19
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Jun 13, 2006 |
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I thought the story quite good, especially the ending... leaves it open for a possible sequel, no? (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Qmoq
(Edit) (Jun 13, 2006)
- Thanks chksng, unfortunately there won't be a sequel! Q
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| Reviewer:
Radiance
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Jun 12, 2006 |
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smiles,liked your last work better babes (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Jun 11, 2006 |
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Good ideas and a good story, overall. The flow was fairly solid and it read rather quickly. There was little, if any, repetition. This is a solid and erotic tale.
My knocks on the story are few but they are signifigant. First off, the writing style was a bit sophomoric. Certain word choices and descriptions suffered from poor phrasing and, with a little more effort, could have been improved. There were also a few sentences ruined with a single word. For instance "The curtains were drawn, of course, but she liked the feel of fresh air upon her skin nonetheless". The word "nonetheless" was nonsensical in this sentence. There were other oddities, as well. I suspect that if the author goes over the story again that he(?) will discover them with ease. If not for these mistakes I would give the story an "8" or "9". (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
MJs dhyanna
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Jun 11, 2006 |
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OMG I LOVED it!!! Do more breath control LOL!! You are the best luv! (10/10)
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Uncle_Ed
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Jun 10, 2006 |
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Sod the spacing! Q! You are one perverted S O B!
I enjoyed the ideas Hmm!Do I know the characters?! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Qmoq
(Edit) (Jun 10, 2006)
- Hehe. Nope! Eddie is not based on you - it's just that I can never think of good names! And the name "Missy" was given by slut4u, the inspiration behind the story. Cheers! Q
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