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The Last Hours of Jane Author: Depr@ved
(Added on Jun 22, 2006) (This month 72180 readers) (Total 91532 readers)
A woman is abducted, tortured, slowly impaled, then cooked and eaten

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
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Highest Rating: (7/10)
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Reviewer: Doc_Odd (Edit) Rating: Jan 24, 2011
I prefer the conceit in the Dolcett-style stories that the victim is getting turned on. But I like victim POV, and the torture is innovative. (7/10)

Reviewer: Dododecapod (Edit) Rating: Jun 24, 2006
I'm not a big Dolcett fan, but it can be an enjoyable style. Your writing here is competent, but it leaves out so much - any real backstory, emotional resonance, plus frankly it feels a bit rushed.
Still, it's well-written and composed, and the pump-impalement is something new - whic is moderately amazing. You have some promise, so keep writing and learning. (6/10)

Reviewer: Mad Lews (Edit) Rating: Jun 23, 2006
Dolcette light without a story to go with it.
It works better as a graphic, if you’re going to write about it add some substance (rhyme/ reason) or a unique twist.
(7/10)

Reviewer: virginpussy (Edit) Rating: Jun 23, 2006
Weird story, no real substance. Very descriptive though. (4/10)

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