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An Unwelcome Visitor
Author: Aussiegirl
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(Added on Jul 6, 2006)
(This month 70315 readers) (Total 105917 readers) |
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When Abby\'s friends begin to get threatening letters, she finds herself in the hands of an unwelcome visitor. What will her fate be? |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
TheKnothead
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Sep 14, 2006 |
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Aussiegirl, that story was just plain damn hot!! I too, knew fairly early on where this story was leading, but couldn't wait to get there and see what transpired on the way. Very exciting, fun to read and ...oh yeah...HOT! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (Oct 3, 2006)
- Thanks mate,
I am so glad you enjoyed it! It still amazes me that so many people seem to like my work.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 10, 2006 |
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great, outstanding, what else can i can (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (Jul 11, 2006)
- Wow, what more can I say!!
Thank you so much. I know you don't give away 10's easily, so I really value this one.
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Jul 7, 2006 |
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Aussiegirl, this was excellent! Now I know you're not only a good fun and games player, but an outstanding writer as well. This was not only an enjoyable read, but the story was well told. I will definitely be looking forward to more from you. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (Jul 8, 2006)
- Thank you so much for your very kind words.
I am really enjoying writing my stories and am glad others are enjoying reading them as well. Comments like this just make me want to keep on writing, so you can be sure there will be more to come.
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Jul 7, 2006 |
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There was more heat in this story than I can recall any of your stories having. It was well detailed and flowed well. Unfortunately, I found the tale predictable in a manner I don't think was intended. My last complaint was that you have more mistakes in this story than you usual. I think you needed one more edit. Finally, I think it should be noted that, while you have written better stories than this, you managed to pull at my groin more with this story than any other. Well done, Aussie.
**"Undo" will be your undoing. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2006)
- Well, as usual an honest review, so thank you.
While of course I hate to think of you finding it predicatable, at least it got to you in other ways.
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H Dean
(Edit) (Jul 8, 2006)
- Remember, Aussie, I look for twists and stuff. So, the predictability may be just my own penchant for twists rearing its ugly head.
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| Reviewer:
Rabbit1
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Jul 7, 2006 |
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you have done it again Aussiegirl ---I loved the story please keep them coming (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2006)
- Thanks Rabbit,
So glad you liked it.
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| Reviewer:
pixie_dust
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Jul 7, 2006 |
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Great story. Interesting plot and a very surprising ending!!! I loved it! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (Jul 7, 2006)
- Thanks so much, pixie_dust.
I am so glad you liked it and that the ending was a surprise. I tried hard to write a story with a bit of twist.
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jul 6, 2006 |
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A very good story with an interesting twist! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2006)
- Thanks heycarrieanne, I'm glad you liked it and the twist. I wasn't sure if I would be able to make the twist work, but wanted to give it a go anyway.
Thanks for you review and vote.
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| Reviewer:
Qmoq
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Jul 6, 2006 |
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Very very nice as usual, Aussiegirl! I've been trying to work out how your stories are so consistently good, and the only thing I can think is that you're great at dialogue, descriptions of actions and descriptions of feelings... but you don't show off: it's the story that's the important thing.
Oo and I particularly liked the entire scene where Abby and Joanna were tied together - oh my! *Fans brow* (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Aussiegirl1
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2006)
- Thanks Qmoq for your very kind words, they made my day!
This was one of the first times I have included f/f in my stories, so I am so glad you enjoyed that scene.
Tahnks again.
Aussiegirl
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