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DiamondStar IV
Author: Electric Badger
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(Added on Aug 4, 2006)
(This month 115187 readers) (Total 176219 readers) |
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When her home is attacked, a young girl is forced into slavery -- but with each new debasement her own desires grow darker. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
lbfm
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Oct 13, 2010 |
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Great story indeed, i love the scifi theme (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 28, 2009 |
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Let me guess, your real name is George Lucas, and the reason why the latest Star Wars movies suck bigtime is because you were concentrating on this here little ...errr... diamond...
If not, someone better call Lucas and let him read this story of galactical proportions. Shouldn't Georgie be impressed, at least there's a chance he'll pump the pomp out of his nuts while his crumbled brain might expand to its original proportions when soaking in endorphines.
Anyway, I'll stop badgering Electric with me calling him George and tell the lad he did a marvellous job in creating this universe and everybody/everything that populates it.
Electric George... mmm... now there's a thought... sounds like a nice name for a shiny Star Wars Dildo Deluxe... where's my phone...
JJ (10/10)
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jesperi
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Oct 3, 2008 |
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I've loved this one since the beginning. Please finish it. lol (9/10)
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graycat
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Jul 15, 2007 |
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Easily one of the best stories on the site. Great mix of narrative and sex, and fantastic writing. Do yourself a favour and read it! (10/10)
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Alex Bragi
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Jun 28, 2007 |
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Reviewed on library forum. (10/10)
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Haelix
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Mar 15, 2007 |
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This story is absolutely beautiful... fantastic job!! (10/10)
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Snark
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Mar 7, 2007 |
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Well done, excellant so far. Good story development, interesting characters that are all individuals. Imaginative setting that enable's this fan of sci-fi to easily suspend disbelief. Please, continue! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ElectricBadger
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2007)
- Thank you greatly! Glad you're enjoying it!
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| Reviewer:
faust82
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Feb 16, 2007 |
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For a while now I've been under the assumption that no stories could compete with the Julie series by LordDouche. Now, that no longer holds true. This story is by far the best story I've ever read, at least so far.
Dark, suspenseful moments, plot twists, seemingly happy endings, and then over the next curve. This rollercoaster of a story takes you everywhere.
Can't wait for the continuation! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ElectricBadger
(Edit) (Feb 18, 2007)
- Wow, thank you so much! I really hope to get back to writing this soon, struggling with the layout of the next couple chapters but I have a lot planned!
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faust82
(Edit) (Mar 1, 2007)
- Chapter 10.. A bit short, but the way it ends makes it impossible to figure out where it's headed. Does she escape? Is the plot discovered? Is the plot the revenge of the abused friend? Excellent!
But I really need to know...
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ElectricBadger
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2007)
- Thank you again! A couple short chapters, I know, but trying to keep posting even though I'm busy lately. 11 needs some re-working eventually, but hopefully the plot is thickening nicely!
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faust82
(Edit) (Jul 11, 2007)
- Chapter 13... I don't know. There's a level of pure, uncontrolled violence here that's making me uneasy. It seems mistress has lost control completely, and no longer cares about the wellbeing of her slave. That's a slippery slope..
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| Reviewer:
bethany
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Dec 29, 2006 |
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omg...I just loved this story, esp since I'm in the Navy! Your writing is wonderful, the characters have life and it's a fun, upbeat kind of tale. Please don't stop writing and don't let it get too dark, keep it exactly as you have it now and if you need any ideas on the military, please do give me a buzz. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ElectricBadger
(Edit) (Dec 30, 2006)
- Thank you, I'm glad you like it! I hope to get back to this story soon!
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Nikaia
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Oct 25, 2006 |
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I adore this story! Much better than the average internet porn stories. Actually has characters that are believable, and doesn't go overboard on physical descriptions - you know, "her 32DDDDD breasts" etc. I love it. Please continue to write it! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ElectricBadger
(Edit) (Oct 25, 2006)
- Thank you tons for the response! I definitely want to continue the story, just need to find the time; hopefully there'll be another update within a couple weeks, so check back!
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| Reviewer:
chaomancer
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Aug 6, 2006 |
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Very good indeed. Glad to see there's more to come soon! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
ElectricBadger
(Edit) (Aug 7, 2006)
- Thank you, chaomancer! I should warn the next two chapters (3 & especially 4) are a bit slower, as it's come time to introduce some of the plot. Beginning in 5, however, things should pick up again nicely so bear with me!
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 6, 2006 |
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An interesting beginning indeed, and nicely told. The story deserves many chapters, and more backstory as you go along. Hope you choose to continue it! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
ElectricBadger
(Edit) (Aug 6, 2006)
- Thanks for the feedback! Some characters from her back story will be touched on: Lisa, a friend from the station, is introduced in the next chapter (3) (although again without terribly much history) and I'm planning to give her appearances throughout (she's part of the ending!); Radley isn't forgotten either (and is also integral to the conclusion). I hadn't planned any real review per se of her previous life, but yeah, that might help clarify several things. Now...how to incorporate it? Hmmm....
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| Reviewer:
Disturbing Universe
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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Damn, but this is hot stuff. Look, you gotta write more on this - I'm liking it quite a bit.
-Disturbing Universe (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ElectricBadger
(Edit) (Aug 5, 2006)
- Thank you! More upcoming -- already submitted the next two chapters, and I have a rough outline for several more beyond that, once I fill in some details.
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| Reviewer:
dumboldon
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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A really good start....what's next???? (9/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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nicely done (7/10)
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Millie
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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Not bad at all. There is potential for a good sci fi story here. I hope there will be more soon. (7/10)
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