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Her Uncle's Study
Author: Mark Chapel
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(Added on Aug 29, 2001)
(This month 84706 readers) (Total 122271 readers) |
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Amy is an innocent teenage girl, who finds herself alone and at the mercy of her sadistic Uncle. She forced to strip naked, is subjected to humiliating sexual abuse and has her bottom severely caned. Finally, to consummate his lust, he sodomises the helpless girl. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Shibari
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Jul 18, 2008 |
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Excellent! A favorite fantasy, for sure. I am looking forward to your next endeavor. (10/10)
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Kitten4DADDY
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Oct 4, 2007 |
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This is one of my favorite fantasies. Love to see it in print by someone else...very nice!
Would like to read more! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 2, 2004 |
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nothing spectacular, but i enjoyed reading it (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
MasterRJ
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Apr 27, 2004 |
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I personally have an innocence fetish and I thought he hit the nail with the hammer with this story. One of the things I enjoyed about this story was the author's ability to make you relate and feel the pain of Amy as she is destroyed from the inside out. The only thing I didn't like about this was that I wish there where more to it. Darn...oh well. (10/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Jan 12, 2004 |
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A workman-like story, OK but without any distinguishing merits. Jonathan has described what I have christened "The Curse of Spelchek". What helps to avoid it is to print out your story and let it sit for a few days. Then go back with red pencil. Alternatively, have a friend edit.
For your next story try and think about how to take these characters and get deeper into their heads. Make them unique, make them your own. How about Auntie? How can you bring her into the story. Work on it! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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Oct 8, 2001 |
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This one isn't too bad for what it is. What it is is a single sexual encounter
between Amy and her uncle. Amy is stripped, spanked, and sodomized. Pretty
standard stuff. It is done a little better than average, except for one thing:
This story is so littered with malapropisms that it reads like it was written by
Archie Bunker. Please note that a spelling checker is of no use when you use the
wrong word but spell it correctly ('finely' instead of 'finally' is only one example),
although it was amusing when the cane was taped on Amy's butt.
On the plus side, character development is better than average. We do get a
feel for Amy's emotions, and the pacing is good.
With regard to the author's threat to write a sequel if this story is popular, I would
respectfully suggest that that's a lousy reason to write a story. Write it because
you want to, not because someone else wants (or doesn't want) you to. I would
also like to request that the scope be expanded in a sequel. Add another
character or two, expand the scope to more than a single encounter or a single
day, and, as always, please include a plot. It would be nice if there was more
to the story than Amy's shame and humiliation and her uncle's lust.
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
kingsbest
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Oct 8, 2001 |
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Brillaint.Cannot wait for many seqels/similar stories. (10/10)
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