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Good Manners
Author: JensenDenmark
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(Added on Sep 27, 2006)
(This month 54898 readers) (Total 67963 readers) |
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The Danish public last told patience with the youth drinking, having sex and destroying property. So new and tuff laws are passed in the government and this is the story about a young man being put through the system. (24-09-2006: This is part one only. Work is in progress.) |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Sep 28, 2006 |
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The imagination of this author is fantastic, however i had to stop reading half way through because i could no longer take the broken English. I suspect this author's first language is not English. The content is great, the delivery makes it unreadable. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Sep 27, 2006 |
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The story was very good, and the grammar was better. Especially liked the ending. (7/10)
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schoolboylv
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Sep 27, 2006 |
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This is much improved over your past stories. But you still need to work on your grammar. Many mispellings and incorrect word usages. (8/10)
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