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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Oct 22, 2006 |
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What I understood of it was quite literate and enjoyable to read. However, having to reach for my handy-dandy Hebrew-English dictionary every few sentences...and then finding that the word I was looking for wasn't there...well, I guess there are some things you don't learn at class on Saturday, amd some words they don't put in dictionaries. So, I just used my imagination to fill in the blank spots. And please, folks, don't ask me to provide a translation, because I'm not literate enough in either Hebrew or Yiddish. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
castle2001
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Oct 6, 2006 |
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Good joke on language twerps.
Looking for a great BDSM tale in the language of the prophet.
Or would that just be a retelling of Sept 11, the snuff of Danny Pearl, the shooting in the back of a nun, or the dismemberment of captured infidels.
Real life becomes more than my fantasies and loses any erotisism. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Oct 22, 2006)
- I'm not quite sure what your problem with this story is, castle. There are several stories posted here in Portugese, among other languages, yet I don't see you criticizing them. What makes you think people who speak a different language than you are less erotic or have fantasies unlike anyone else? I seem to recall a couple of stories here about Nazi concentration camps, and several about nuns being raped. I guess because they were all in English, it's no big deal to you; but let them be in Hebrew and all of a sudden it's about ethnicity, race and religion? Do yourself a favor...get a grip!
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| Reviewer:
Illuminatus
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Oct 2, 2006 |
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I cannot read this story, but I feel that I must nonetheless counteract what I feel is a nasty, unfair, and possibly racist review given by elfstone8402. If a story is in English, only English and American readers can read it. If a story is in French, only the French can read it. The same is true if it is in Hebrew. I commend The Outsider for his courage in submitting a story to BDSMLibrary, and for his evident command of the Hebrew language, in being able to produce such a work. I also, like JimmyJump, would love to see a translation of this, if someone could produce one, as I unfortunately cannot read Hebrew either. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Oct 3, 2006)
- Just so that everybody knows: I based my score on the fact that it would be unfair to give zilch points, as I am unable to read the story; and I cannot give a 10 for the same reason. Therefore I chopped the score in half, to praise the effort, not as a result of any prejudice against Hebrew.
I would be a sad example of the Human race if/when I would let the language in which a story is written, influence my behaviour in giving out a score...
Giving-out a Ten, is a bold move, but an understandable one in the light of Elfstone8402's pointless comment.
JJ
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| Reviewer:
elfstone8402
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Oct 1, 2006 |
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Doing this is Hebrew is simply racist, since only Jews will be able to read it. And yet I bet you whine every time someone singles out Jews in a negative way. Reap what you sow, bitch. You should be whipped for your insolence, as should the idiot editor who approved this (2/10)
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Rabbit1
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2006)
- looks like you just singled out the only Hebrew story on the site to attack ---do not see you attacking German stories or Spanish stories ---and since you like to flame people instead of review a story --you just got banned
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H Dean
(Edit) (Oct 4, 2006)
- I just thought I would lend support to the actions taken against this particular review/reviewer. The review was completely uncalled for, ridiculous and out of line. More power to you, Rabbit.
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castle2001
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2006)
- In the past people of letters read latin, greek and hebrew in order to know the past.
Being educated is not being racist. Whipping a writer is not a bad idea. On this site the writer might just enjoy it.
I bet the writer knows English at least as well as Elfebone.
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castle2001
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2006)
- In the past people of letters read latin, greek and hebrew in order to know the past.
Being educated is not being racist. Whipping a writer is not a bad idea. On this site the writer might just enjoy it.
I bet the writer knows English at least as well as Elfebone.
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Sep 30, 2006 |
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Anybody out there who can translate this..?
I don't mind Dutch, French, German or even Italian or Spanish stories, but Hebrew is a wee bit out of my league, I'm afraid.
JJ (5/10)
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