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Owner\'s Demise
Author: Wolffie
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(Added on Oct 5, 2006)
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Hotel maids teach The Owner a lesson and give him a treatment he secretly craves. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Oct 21, 2006 |
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I don't have to tell you this is a favorite F/m story. It is on my bookshelf. One of the things I like about it, is that every time I read it, I learn something more about humiliation. It is rich with subtle symbolism. Thank you for sharing it. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Jul 3, 2007)
- Althought humlation was not to be main theme of the story it went that way - and big time too.
I am really proud that this is your favorite F/m story . I will have to try to top that.
Thank you for your rating! WOW!
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| Reviewer:
The_Trainer
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Oct 10, 2006 |
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Not usually into F/m stories, but since I enjoy your others, I checked this out. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Oct 11, 2006)
- Thank you for taking time to read and rate it.
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| Reviewer:
Mistress M
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Oct 10, 2006 |
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I enjoyed the way is was written, the staccato style of someone who is trying to avoid humiliation but seeming to look for it at the same time. The clue at the end, what was on the suitcase? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Oct 11, 2006)
- Thank you! Sometimes style is the best way to point out to emotions of the charaters.
Letters on suitcase spell the name of the person to whom the story is dedicated.
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Oct 6, 2006 |
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Very nice, enjoyed every word.
(8/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2006)
- thank you. glad you enjoyed it.
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Oct 5, 2006 |
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i dont usually read F/m stories, but saw it was written by Wolffie, and i luv Wolffies stories. and i was right! i luv the way You write!! i will read the next chapter just as eagerly.
thank You, blu (8/10)
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- Replied by:
pejanon
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2006)
- Thank you so much blu! I am still searching for the right 'mode' to write F/m stories, and I NEED to write them too.
As to the next chapter ... now that you mention it...
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