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Jenny\'s Abduction
Author: ABUSER
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(Added on Jan 18, 2007)
(This month 66342 readers) (Total 99270 readers) |
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Young girl abducted and used for perverted film-making |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
grinner666
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Mar 7, 2008 |
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Crap storyline, crap characters, crap motivation. Total crap. And the author needs to learn to spell, and to differentiate between present and past tense and FUCKING CHOOSE ONE. (1/10)
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JonMaddux
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Jan 20, 2007 |
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i had trouble following the story. It seems to jump around from time to time. Not a bad story it just needs some developement and editing. (6/10)
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chksng19
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Jan 19, 2007 |
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Not sure if English is your primary language. Many, many distracting errors and spell-checker mistakes.
This story seems hard to follow to me, and appears, at this point, to be just another "abducted girl for sex toy" creation. More motivations for behaviors, less screaming and more character development would help, I think (5/10)
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