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Becoming a submissive slut
Author: jenna murray
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(Added on Jan 24, 2007)
(This month 65661 readers) (Total 85197 readers) |
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jenna is taken dominantly and learns that she likes her new found submission. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
strata272002
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Jan 22, 2011 |
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Excellent. well written and no rediculous exageration. You have no reason to be afraid of submitting a story. This was great! (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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If there is one thing to be learned from this effort, then it is that you, Jenna, have absolutely no reason to be afraid of submitting a story.
For this here exploit shows that you have both the talent and ability of good storytelling, to become an accomplished writer.
"Becoming a Submissive Slut" has all the qualities of good writing: it is endearing, has great dialogue, is well paced and is totally and utterly believable.
On top of that, and what makes the story so much better in my eyes, is the highly erotic vulnerability and shyness of Jenna, but also the willingness to go the distance.
We, the readers, can only hope that jenna murray will overcome her fear once more and provide us with another of her delicious writings.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
MISTRESS H
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Dec 20, 2007 |
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Jenna: After reading the start of the story, I feel a need to ready more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Minusman1009
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Apr 30, 2007 |
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One of the very best on this site, hands down. Erotic and very intimate. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
jenna murray
(Edit) (Jul 11, 2007)
- thank you very much for your review. i hope i aroused you.
j
xxx
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Sophiabelle
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Jan 29, 2007 |
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A rather well written tale with a story line that follows through. There are some technical errors (as mentioned above) and minor writting errors, but they do not detract greatly from the story. I would recommend it highly, and even suggest it for persons looking to pinpoint qualities of their submissive emotions. (9/10)
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dennisthmn
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Jan 29, 2007 |
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the best story I have read for a very long time. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Charles E. Campbell
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Jan 28, 2007 |
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Very well written and composed. A gradual build as the woman comes to grips with who/what she is. It reads like a first person autobiographical account.I hope more will soon follow. (9/10)
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texanpauline
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Jan 27, 2007 |
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This is a superb story. The very minor mistakes did not impact at all on my enjoyment, and you should not get paranoid about them. The story was very credible, well paced, well written, with slowly building suspense all through, with a nice twist at the end. One of the best stories I've ever read, and I've read a lot. Thank you! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sam Blythe
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Jan 27, 2007 |
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Well done. You need have no fear of delivering quality work. You might consider editing it once more before submitting to clean up the typos, but well written otherwise. I appreciate the sexual tension you have maintained in the story with Jenna. I am curious to see if you can maintain it in subsequent addtions. I like the fact that she continues to be embarrassed and even question her ability to submit.
I look forward to the next addition. (9/10)
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bobby44
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Jan 26, 2007 |
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Wonderful beginning, hope you keep it going! (9/10)
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chksng19
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Jan 25, 2007 |
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A little formatting problem that the moderator should be able to fix does not mar the quality of the story.
Well told, even the frequent sentence fragments are an appropriate part of the tale. I hope you have more to share! (9/10)
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masterdw
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Jan 24, 2007 |
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very well done. There seems to be a technival problem in that certain paragraphs just keep going across the page and require adjusting the screen, while others are normal. The story is great. (10/10)
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