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Painaholic
Author: stHell66
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(Added on Feb 24, 2007)
(This month 53208 readers) (Total 74375 readers) |
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about a teen girl that gets off on pain, comix and pretty extreme. Having to deal with guest sadist villians. |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
25toLife
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Feb 27, 2007 |
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No one likes reading fragments of words and pieces of sentences, even if ur idea is good so please FIX it. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
badcatholicgirl
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Feb 26, 2007 |
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bad format, but it's not that bad, write the story in "asstr org" much better format. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 26, 2007 |
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The last line if the tale says, "To be continued." Unless you can fix spelling, grammar, formatting, and the general lack of English writing skills, please don't. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Feb 25, 2007 |
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I can't add any more then "Snark" as stated (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Feb 24, 2007 |
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Apparently the author still hasn't bothered to learn the concept of spell checker, grammar editing and a better grasp of English. Barely readable. My suspension of disbelief never stirred. (2/10)
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