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Masters introduction of the new pig
Author: Mitzi Forbes
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(Added on Mar 20, 2007)
(This month 86308 readers) (Total 117665 readers) |
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Master decided to introduce the pig he had been training for quite a few months to some of his lifestyle friends. What an intro.... |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 2, 2009 |
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heycarrieanne seems to need glasses and Phedra has to stay away from the laughing-gas, because I found nothing wrong with this here tale, bar some spelling and other mistakes.
Okay, as far as over-the-toppishness goes, this story is on the frontline. And the author also seems to be in a rush, forgoing on some detail, which tends to lessen the erotic feel.
But I liked it. Enough to grant an eight. Which I cha,ge into a ten, just to even-out heycarrieanne's unfair score.
JJ (10/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Mar 28, 2007 |
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You have typos galore and your writing is extremely stilted.
The second chapter is completely unreadable! (2/10)
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Phedra
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Mar 22, 2007 |
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ROTFLMAO!!! (6/10)
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