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The Capture Of Fuck Toy
Author: Connie Miller
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(Added on Oct 20, 2001)
(This month 111754 readers) (Total 150433 readers) |
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I met a girl while jogging and I just had to have her. So I kidnapped her and used and abused her. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (3/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
Master T
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Apr 2, 2011 |
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pitiful attempt and all the other reviewers said (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Raivin
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Nov 4, 2007 |
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This story represents everything that can be bad about on-line erotica. Please, Ms. Miller, learn how to use the written English language correctly before attempting another story? (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 5, 2004 |
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i enjoyerd the basic concept of the story, but it could have been done better (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 10, 2003 |
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Oh dear, oh dear! The education system has a lot to answer for. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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Oct 27, 2001 |
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The two previous reviewers have pretty much said it all. I agree with them. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
ownedgirl
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Oct 24, 2001 |
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i must agree with the previous reviewer. The grammer, sentence structure, the whole flow of the story was way off, along with no new creativity for this plot-line and very cardboard like characters. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jacen
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Oct 24, 2001 |
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This story seemed to have good potential.. but the utter lack of small, important details such as quotation marks made it unintelligible. I have not read any of her other stories, but as this is the most recent one, I can assume that the others are in the same illiterate format. (2/10)
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