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Slave Island
Author: Marco
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(Added on Apr 11, 2007)
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Two wealthy white women enjoy themselves on an island where dark skinned slaves are available for thwir every whim. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
ponytrainer12
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May 8, 2007 |
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Difficult topic, but found it compelling. Would like to see more focus on the description of he discomfort of the slaves/details. Counterpoint ot the focus on racist languge emphasis. (8/10)
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Crowheart
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Apr 26, 2007 |
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I have problems with the racism theme, too... As Mobius said, there might be an audience for it, but it's a really difficult theme.
Well, I enjoyed you story. It's well written and fun to read. Perhaps it's a bit stereotypic in some points, but well all together I like it. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mobius
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Apr 17, 2007 |
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While it was writen well. dont like storys concerning racisem. Black on white or for that mator white on black are both offesive to me. Yes I understand that there is an audiance for this material. Every one will find some thing erotic but No thanks. It would have been a far better read with out all the N words. Just make it a strieght Lesbian domination story it would have rocked
Moby (6/10)
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chksng19
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Apr 14, 2007 |
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Pretty good tale, with some nice twists. Just one thing: saying "labial lips" is redundant, as 'labia' MEANS lips.
Looking forward to more. (8/10)
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enslaved25
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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Ignore tosh like that first review. There's nothing wrong with the language, it's a highly competent start which can only maintain a high level of eroticism. Well done.
(10/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 11, 2007 |
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i had some issues with the langauge, not sure if enligh id your primary one if not ok if it is, the story needs work (6/10)
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