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Off The Beaten Track
Author: Pauly
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(Added on Oct 23, 2001)
(This month 51264 readers) (Total 69060 readers) |
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Two women tourists in USA take wrong turn and end up in undesirable area. Rape and forced lesbian acts take place. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 11, 2004 |
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the codes you used and the story line used could have and should have been much better (4/10)
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LaJan
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Jul 24, 2002 |
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A poorly written story (numerous typos and punctuation errors) make reading it difficult. The story line is weak and the action is inconsistant. Worst of all, I think it's incorrectly coded and includes SNUFF! This story is a great way to wreck a mood and it's even incomplete! What a total drag and waste of time. A good story to take a pass on. Lajan. (3/10)
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