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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
jip
(Edit) |
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Mar 14, 2006 |
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This is a revenge story. The woman is enjoying the torture she is doing to the girl, who took HER husband. Although cruel and sometimes a little too much it stays within limits. Good story, whatever some pretend. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Mar 10, 2005 |
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Nice job. After reading what others have said, well they are full of it (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 18, 2003 |
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This is a story full of pain and anguish. Unfortunately, most of it is reserved for the reader. Even though it is a fairly short story, I gave up half way due to the absolutely awful writing skills. Already I cannot recall what the story was actually about. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
jip
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2006)
- These are remarks I find ridiculous. I read the whole story without problem. Sorry!
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
(Edit) |
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Nov 29, 2002 |
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I always judge highly on the writing skill of the writer when I judge a story. I have one word to say to this story. UGH! You get the title wrong, and you're damned for life. Also "I enjoyed dating married men till the man's wife found out and tortured me till I will never again date another married man." Errors: married men (add comma after this), till I will never again ... "until I will never again? That doesn't make any sense. If a person can't even get the Title and Synopsis right, it's not worth reading. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
jevandtieriel
(Edit) |
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Nov 6, 2002 |
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loved it...
the story went very quickly though... (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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Oct 27, 2001 |
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Adding my comments to those of Hyphen666 is like piling on. I wouldn't have
bothered to write a review of this story, except that it made me angry to read it.
When the author can't even get the title right (it's "woman's", not "Women's"),
you can be pretty sure you're dealing with a lost cause. Paragraphs and punctuation
are not optional. Dialog requires quotation marks. Every time you change
speakers, it's a new paragraph. If you didn't do that, it's wrong.
The one that really hacks me off, though, is the "me and Paul" crap. It hurts my
ears just to read it. Just so you'll know, here's how you test for that: Try it first
with just the pronoun. For instance, if you said, "Me and Paul went to the store",
if you leave Paul out, you have "Me went to the store" which is what it sounds
like to anyone who speaks English. So, if you would say "I went to the store" then
it's "Paul and I went to the store". If you would say "Jane went to the store with
me" then it would be "Jane went to the store with Paul and me". See how that
works? "I" is subjective case, "me" is objective case. When you mix them up,
you sound stupid.
This could have, should have, been a good story, had it been competently
executed, but that's like saying this would have been a good car if they hadn't put the
engine in backwards and left three of the wheels off. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
Nitrofox
(Edit) (Nov 29, 2002)
- I agree whole-heartedly. The "me and Paul" thing drives me absolutely nuts. I in fact, use the same method as Jonathan to figure out whether it's right. Also, the whole writing process went down the drain, like Hyphen666 said.
Ugh.
- Replied by:
jip
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2006)
- I don't know the nationality or the language of the writer, she could be German speaking. I'm always amazed that some English speaking people, who generally do not need to learn and do not even know another language are eager to make critics.
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Oct 27, 2001 |
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I think the torments suffered by the world's most stupid bimbo were fairly creative, if not a bit overdone (rotating saber saw indeed). I have no sympathy for someone who would blindly follow such ridiculous instructions. I also think that either the author must have been asleep when english was being taught, or english is not the author's native tongue. To compound the felony it is apparent that proof reading is also not considered to be part of the writing process. (3/10)
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