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Version 13
Author: the_Gray_Man
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(Added on May 11, 2007)
(This month 69035 readers) (Total 89667 readers) |
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What happens when a man going nowhere in life is given the chance of a lifetime? Jack Dullman has been given a free virtual fantasy in the computer generated world of his choice. The only problem is getting back out of it alive. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 24, 2009 |
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Computer Generated Graphics, Virtual Reality and Artificial Intelligence all combined in a thoroughly well prepared and executed story.
Get a mix of different timescapes, add a nice dose of witty humor and deliciously perverted sex and you've got "Version 13".
Well done.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Reaper96
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Jul 12, 2007 |
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Good idea with alot of potential. Can't wait to see more! (10/10)
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patrick_hh
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Great story, more please (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
78curious
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May 13, 2007 |
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Good story - nice unexpected twists to it, and leaves you wanting the next post! (10/10)
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