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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Jun 25, 2007 |
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i lo ve all pnoy girl stories but ihave to agree with chksng, part of the story even as fantasy make the story very hard to blieve, you have to make astory belieivable even as a fantasy (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jun 16, 2007 |
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Barely a chapter length makes it hard to judge. Unbelievable things (running all night? Nobody on earth could do that!) A proof-reader would help eliminate mistakes like reign for rein. In writing prose, numbers are written out ("two men" not '2 men'). More, but you get the idea, I hope.
The basic story idea is good and interesting, but it begs for more length and examination of the girl's thoughts and feelings. (5/10)
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