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An unexpected turn Author: Loukas
(Added on Sep 13, 2007) (This month 50741 readers) (Total 63403 readers)
He ended up helplessat the hands of a dominating woman, that he accidentally met 2 hours ago.

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Reviewer: DungeonMaster6 (Edit) Rating: Nov 3, 2007
Despite the mispellings, I found this story to be enjoyable. The story line is refreshingly original and it's not too long. I can overlook the poor grammar. After all this is not a class on English Composition (8/10)

Reviewer: slaveneedledick (Edit) Rating: Sep 17, 2007
English is probably not the first language of the author. The grammer and word usage was poor. Or the other thing that could have happened was the author forgot to proof read before submitting. The storyline itself has promise but in it's current state very hard to read. (2/10)
Replied by: loukas (Edit) (Sep 17, 2007)
grammer? thats proof read i guess...Thought this is not Cambridge Certificate of Proficiency but guess i was wrong...thatnks for stopping by!

Reviewer: bracemaiden (Edit) Rating: Sep 15, 2007
I have to agree with trainmanretep. Decent concept, but the writing style, like the formatting, was halting. (6/10)
Replied by: loukas (Edit) (Sep 17, 2007)
thank you for stopping by

Reviewer: trainmanretep (Edit) Rating: Sep 14, 2007
An OK concept. The story could have used some editing. (5/10)
Replied by: loukas (Edit) (Sep 15, 2007)
thank you for your review.

Reviewer: dork330i (Edit) Rating: Sep 13, 2007
please continue the story, im in love with it. (8/10)

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