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Elizabeths Night Author: Kris_2
(Added on Sep 13, 2007) (This month 55766 readers) (Total 67934 readers)
Elizabeth has recently began submitting to her husband Michaels liking. Now is the time for him to increase her devotion through a surprise piercing and a horny professor.

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Reviewer: Mad Lews (Edit) Rating: Sep 22, 2007
The story is well thought out, the descriptions are vivid, the only problem is formating. To say your paragraphs are overly long is to minimize the problem. Dialog should go into separate paragraphs for each new speaker. You do that occasionally but you should do it more consistently. Giant blocks of text twenty sentences long can scare off readers. (8/10)

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