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Lauren's Ruler
Author: TheDom InTheHat
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(Added on Sep 13, 2007)
(This month 179692 readers) (Total 252107 readers) |
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A teenage girl's cruel father turns over her dicipline to an older boy she thought was her friend who takes on his new role with considerable enthusiasm punishing and humiliating her. |
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| Reviewer:
Losalt
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May 22, 2010 |
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So far so good.
But the story is still unfinished.
Also, some of the tags you've added have not yet been justified.
If you want them to be accurate you might want to write a bit more ;-)
At any rate I hope there is more chapters on their way, I know I'll read them and perhaps change my rating :-) (8/10)
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grinner666
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Mar 15, 2008 |
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A few spelling and grammatical errors, but VERY hot. More, please, and soon. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
thedominthehat
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2007)
- More chapters are coming shortly. Thanks for reviewing my filthy smut.
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| Reviewer:
TzA
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Oct 20, 2007 |
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Excellent story, well done.
I hope you will post more chapters (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
frogscookie
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Oct 12, 2007 |
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just lovely very good i cant wait to read more (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
YNHumiliator
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Oct 1, 2007 |
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Love the humiliation angle - nicely written too. Looking forward to more from you. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
theroadtoad
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Sep 21, 2007 |
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Very good story. I like the premise but why didn't that ever happen to me when I was 21?
I look forward to more chapters. What happens when the pizza arrives? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
fellatrix
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Sep 19, 2007 |
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Very sexy and well written. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
thedominthehat
(Edit) (Sep 19, 2007)
- Thanks for the reviews, it's good to know my smut is appreciated :)
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| Reviewer:
Arcege
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Sep 19, 2007 |
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Wonderful premise and story. Noticed some minor proofreading errors, but nothing to detract from the readability or arousal factor. More, more! (8/10)
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reeling
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Sep 19, 2007 |
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Great! Fast paced and fun. Looking forward to more.
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 19, 2007 |
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very well fdone i hope you plan to add more chapters (8/10)
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