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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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Rating:  (3.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 27, 2007 |
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an erotic fantasy that simply does not cut it, some subjects are very difficult to make "spoofs" out of, such as super heroes ect. this is one ofthose, i know Buffy is not a super gero but thestory is alongthe same lines (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
petleah
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Sep 22, 2007 |
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As a fan of BtVS and its fanfiction of all kinds, this falls pitifully short of any quality (even mediocre) writing. The names could easily be substituted with Tom, Dick, and Jane and lose no (and might even gain) context, clarity, flow, or even quality.
As for grammar and sentence structure a 5th grader is certainly capable of writing more complex sentences and conveying a better plot and background. Spelling leaves much to desire and most of it can be corrected with a simple run of spell check in Microsoft Word.
Overall even if this is a PWP or Porn w/some Plot piece it is currently a waste of time to read and can benefit from a major improvement of plot, background information, and spelling/grammar corrections. (3/10)
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