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Dark Mind Author: Black
(Added on Sep 19, 2007) (This month 51372 readers) (Total 60874 readers)
In a small town a reject plots to kidnap and torture a popular girl that lives next door to him.

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Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Sep 24, 2007
Lots of concerns. There are these odd things called paragraphs, and sentences. Capital letters in appropriate places and grammar rules followed helps too. The story has potential, but at least give the grammar thing a try, ok? (5/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Sep 23, 2007
not bad, smaller size fonts would be nice (6/10)

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