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Teaching Carol
Author: Zenmackie
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(Added on Oct 7, 2007)
(This month 123289 readers) (Total 195647 readers) |
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A young student teacher begins to discover her submissive nature. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Femme.100percent
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Dec 7, 2011 |
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Great attention to detail, inner thoughs also great, use of adjectives, grammatically correct. Should be published, highly recommend. Great story! Look forward to reading more (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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Very touching account of a girl being seduced into submissiveness. Very well portrayed, especially in the way Carol reacts and little by little is taken a step further.
Excellent.
JJ (10/10)
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Elkor
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Oct 29, 2007 |
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Nicely written, especially how you captured the mindset of the subject. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 21, 2007 |
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nice story, well written (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 11, 2007 |
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I don't know how much more mkemse needs before he can review, but the first three parts were enough for me. This is quality work, and I hope it continues. Don't feel the need to take this story to extremes. I like extreme stuff, but this has a different feel to it. (10/10)
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subcurious63
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Oct 9, 2007 |
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i very much enjoyed your story, and would love to read more. i very much enjoy the Domination/submission, and humiliation in this story. The only thing that would have made it perfect for me, would have been spanking. Please continue to teach Carol (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Zenmackie
(Edit) (Oct 11, 2007)
- Thanks so much for your kind review. I wish I could send you a spanking via email by way of thanks.
Carol does get spanked in later chapters (there are ten in all). If you can't wait you can go here:
http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=533505&page=submissions
You'll note that the 'Carol' stories are available as audio if you'd enjoy having them read to you.
I hope you'll let me know what you think. (Contact info is available at the same link.) --Zenmackie
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