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Sex Pills Author: darkheat
(Added on Dec 1, 2007) (This month 72690 readers) (Total 112917 readers)
Kat humilates the girls from her class with the help of a new drug.

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Weighed Average (?): (6/10)
Average Rating: (6/10)
Highest Rating: (8/10)
Lowest Rating: (3/10)

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Reviewer: Dragon's muse (Edit) Rating: Dec 10, 2007
If I could, I would refrain from rating this piece for the simple reason that I was unable to get past the first two paragraphs.
The basic idea might be a sound one, but with no grammar to speak of in the execution of the idea rather makes that moot point.
As another reviewer said, get a proofreader/editor and revise it, and my rating will also be revised. (3/10)

Reviewer: hiwiz4u3 (Edit) Rating: Dec 3, 2007
I thought the story moved well... (7/10)

Reviewer: Muddog (Edit) Rating: Dec 2, 2007
I thought the story was creative though it is a common theme. There were some issues with the story structure in general but I found myself caught up enough in the story itself that the text structure didn't bother me at all. I'm looking forward to more. (8/10)

Reviewer: Rocky (Edit) Rating: Dec 2, 2007
Okay, here's the deal: A decent enough story line, but you really need to either find an editor/proofreader or learn a bit about basic grammar, like capitalization, punctuation, and sentence structure. The number of run-on sentences with no punctuation make it difficult to read. I'd certainly consider revising my rating if you did the same with your story. It has a lot of promise. (5/10)

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