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College Life
Author: Narrator of Filth
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(Added on Dec 16, 2007)
(This month 21186 readers) (Total 54714 readers) |
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They thought that this college would be their ticket to a better life. Instead it turned out to be a nightmare for every one of them. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 11, 2008 |
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nice beginnig, where to next (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Razor7826
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Jan 3, 2008 |
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I like it and I hope to see more. My main complaint is that it jumps around too much; you tried to cover too much ground in too little time. Each of the sections feels like it should be quite a bit longer. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
grinner666
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Dec 28, 2007 |
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Very nice. The author is right, there are loads of cliches here, but they're well-written and VERY hot. Certainly worth the time to read, and I hope to see lots more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Wiley Hunter
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Dec 23, 2007 |
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The first chapter is a very nice setup, clearly guiding the story to some very hard usage of some very innocent girls.
We aren't talking particularly believable here, but the fantasy is well-done, and should provide some very good usage scenarios. (7/10)
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azrlg17
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Dec 23, 2007 |
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Good start, interesting plot. Good grammar and spelling. The story jumps around a bit too much I would have preferred if the chapter concentrated on one of the victims. Every time it got interesting the focus skipped to another pairing.
While the story is cool as it is I would like to read a story about some victim going BDSM-Colombine on a brotherhood/sorority like this or a father/mother or friend/sibling going BDSM-Charles-Bronson on the whole town. Maybe you can put that in as the end.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
zakaluka
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Dec 19, 2007 |
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Very interesting plot line, as others have mentioned. The English was perfectly fine.
Now that you have the envnironment set up, I'd suggest delving a little into the characters. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
redheadedkristin
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Dec 19, 2007 |
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Extremely interesting start to a unique plot. It made me think back to my college experiences.
Please please continue (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Dec 18, 2007 |
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You've come up with a rather interesting, somewhat unique story line, and I'd like to see more (assuming you get over your writer's block). Fairly well written, particularly for someone for whom English is not a native language. I'd like to see more description in the story; for instance, describing the individuals, their surroundings, and more importantly, their emotions, in a little more detail. A bit more of that, and you'd certainly rate an 8 or possibley a 9. As it is now, probably a 7.5...but the system doesn't allow for half points! (7/10)
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