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    Punished
    
    Author: caiged
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    (Added on Jan 29, 2008)
            (This month 56635 readers) (Total 70550 readers) | 
   
   
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    Maybe should call it a fantasy. | 
   
 
 
   
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     Weighed
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    Average 
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    Highest 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Daveacco
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    Feb 4, 2008 | 
   
   
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        Well done Miss Caiged.  Maybe I should get off my arse and finish my latest one. (you will get a preview of course!!) Keep up the good work Acco (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    slvWriting
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    Feb 3, 2008 | 
   
   
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        It was nicely written, but the story wasn't good enough for me, it didn't generate any heat. It is just a description of the punishment the girl is undertaking, and I didn't even buy it, I didn't feel at anytime this could really happen. (7/10) 
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